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十天突破新托福Essays（附MP3光盘，便携学习手册1本）

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《十天突破新托福Essays》是出国考试类畅销书作者慎小嶷老师的又一力作。《十天突破新托福Essays》紧扣官方资料要求而编写，所涉及资料均选自美国本土出版的资料。《十天突破新托福Essays》将探讨中国留美考生在准备新托福作文过程中急需解决的大量实战问题：如何选择写作中真正需要的美语词汇；怎样才能写出灵活多样的地道英文句子；哪种段落结构才符合美国人的“审美观”；为什么必须果断放弃已经被用烂了的经典人物，而改举Made in theU.S.的新例子；偏题、难题的高分素材和段落；北美作文同义词替换台集等等。
《十天突破新托福Essays》中的全部例句都取自近两年在美国本土出版的资料，讲解方向也与的官方要求同步。《十天突破新托福Essays》中加分词汇和例句都由两位美籍专家用标准美音为大家录制了光盘，可以边听边记。因此，在准确把握北美议论文写作风格的同时，您将发现《十天突破新托福Essays》也是您正式开始积累地道美式英语的milestone。

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慎小嶷，我的中文名字叫慎小嶷，英文名字叫Patrick，很多朋友也喜欢简单地称呼我Pat。长期在美国、加拿大两国生活，让我对英语这种世界上越来越多的人之间使用的沟通工具有了更直接的体验。2005年起开始在环球雅思北京总校教授雅思写作、口语两门课程。在环球雅思北京总校统计的学生全年反馈总评中，写作、口语这两科的教师总分排名我都名列前茅，“主讲教师”这四个字应该受之无愧。我目前在北美从事学术研究。

Catalogue

推荐序
作者自序
引言
致读者

Day 1 的初体验
新托福考生很难回答的10个问题
My Answers

Day 2 思路的尽头
3种快速解题方法
分类法
裸奔法
测测你的进展
学有余力
课后练习

Day 3 无糖语法
正确理解5种句子成分
有效区分3种句子
有效避免7类语法错误
来自老托福考试的启示
学有余力
课后练习
参考答案

Day 4 词汇不是纸老虎
（上）Pat对新托福作文核心词汇的总结
新托福写作完整加分词库：1180词
（下）Pat关于写作词汇的心里话
中国考生最容易失手的写作单词总结
新托福作文抽象加分词总结（非牛人请飘过）
那些让你的论证更强有力的verbs（高分内容）
《那些花儿》
魅力四射拉丁族
Pat总结的美国人表述自己的价值观时最喜欢用的12个词
在北美长大的孩子必须面对的8大挑战（高分内容）
学有余力
课后练习

Day 5 轻松玩转linkers
复杂句主、从关系完全透视
因果关系
举例关系
类比与对比关系
让步关系
假设关系
修饰关系
限定关系
下定义关系
不是关系的关系
学有余力
课后练习

Day 6 给你的句子一点颜色看（高分内容，非大牛留个脚印即可）
状语前置
句中做手脚
副词领路人
倒装是进步的阶梯
强调但不强势
虚拟不等于忽悠
抽象画法的of
被动也疯狂
变性表决心
副词排长队
点、线勾出层次感
“the+形容词”语法可没错儿
双重否定就是肯定
学有余力
课后练习
参考答案

Day 7 该出手时就出手：考场里真正实用的写作句型
北美写作172句型
前进类（论证positive方面常用）
倒退类（论证negative方面常用）
中间类（论证不好不坏／可好可坏方面常用）
6个俗不可耐却没被淘汰的句型
学有余力
课后练习

Day 8 显微镜下的开头、主体与结尾
（上）万事开头未必难
什么是开头
美式议论文Introduction的十四种方案
课后练习
（中）Body的诱惑
Body Paragraphs的展开路径详图
课后练习
（下）蛇尾或豹尾
告别的五种方式
学有余力
课后练习

Day 9 独立作文的结构与解构
最简单也最困难的“一边倒”
“一边倒”范文分析
真写High了怎么办（只适合大虾或者考前德芙摄入过多的童鞋们）
中立但不中庸的“折中式”写法
“折中式”范文分析
致“反动派”们的一封信（只适合基础薄弱或者备考时间极短的小白）
新托福作文模板工具箱
学有余力
课后练习

Day 10 单一的综合体
Integrated Writing的结构与个性化模板
综合写作模板之解构版
综合写作模板同义词替换全集
The Devil is in the Details（高分内容）
学有余力

附录
附录A 新老作文话题总PK（上）
2006～2010年大陆机考话题全集
……

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简单句多数长度不超过10个单词，表达的信息简单，但是很明确，这是它的优点。所以希望大家不要不敢用简单句，其实很多时候简单句也有它的优势，特别是当你已经写了一串儿长句子的时候，一个短小的简单句反而显得生机勃勃，而且给了考官喘口气的机会。
下面我们看一个非常长的“另类”简单句：The failure of the aspirations of the 1960s has led，in the decade since then，to perhaps the most self-centered Dream in American Society.
因为全句只有一个谓语，所以它仍然是一个简单句，但已经是“超级无敌简单句”了。
并列句
并列句就是“主谓宾+主谓宾”，中间用and／or／but 3个词当中的一个把它们串起来。
下面两个例句都是高分范文中的并列句：Their perspective（视角）would be narrow and they would not be able to exchange views with3thers.The smokers may be segregated（隔离）in a different area，but the smoke itself will d rift（飘移）into the nonsmoking side of the restaurant.复杂句
复杂句还是“主谓宾+主谓宾”，但它和并列句的区别在于，句子开头或者中间的连词并不是用and／or／but，而是用更复杂的连词。
如何写好复杂句的问题长期困扰中国考生。我们会在Day 5，Day 6，Day 7中彻底揭开这团迷雾。今天只要求各位先记住：写好最基础的复杂句（即一个主谓宾再加一个主谓宾，其中没有连词的主谓宾叫主句，用一个连词引出的主谓宾叫从句）才是新托福作文最核心的造句能力。当我们把这种最基础的复杂句练习熟练之后，就会发现更难的复杂句自然地就写出来了。而如果非要一步登天，刚上来就追求两三个从句的复杂句，那只会错误连篇，在写作时产生严重的挫败感甚至心理障碍。
下面的例句都是典型的美语复杂句：
In America，people who believe in hegemony(霸权)increasingly turn to military force when their economic power begin to wane(减退)．
These survey findings may understate the crisis in Iraq as the social structure in that country begins to break down．
It would be a mistake though，to imagine that a Democratic administration(民主党政府)would be any different．
……

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在2010年京城滴水成冰的严寒中，《十天突破新托福Essays终于将要付梓了。
这是Pat老师在国内出版的第三本书。本以为在《十天突破雅思写作》与《十天突破雅思口语》两本书仅在中国大陆的销量就已经突破17万册的情况下，对作者来说本书将是信手拈来。但让我始料未及的是：《十天突破新托福Essays的创作过程竞比“十天”系列的前两本耗时更久而且着力更多。从2008年慎老师完成本书提要，直到今年1月他从美国把全书最后的Bibliography传送给我，历时长达1年零三个月，并且作者为了搜集第一手资料还多次往返于中美之间。我有幸见证了本书中每段文字的破茧而出，方知“慎式写作法”的良苦用心。
尽管同为留学语言类考试，新托福作文和雅思作文却有着深刻的不同。除了英美议论文在语言风格上存在明显差异（在本书中大家将看到这些差异体现在题目表述、文体、句法、谋篇布局直至具体单词拼写等诸多方面）之外，新托福作文比雅思写作还更多地涉及到了文化的层面，即学生对于美式价值观的理解和认同。因此，如何在传授地道美式写作实用技法的同时，传达北美社会与文化的要素，对本书作者在各方面的掌控能力均提出了极高的要求。Pat本人拥有十多年北美生活的经历，并且在北京从事英语教学期间批改过数万名中国学生的作文，这些为他完成这本精彩纷呈的新托福写作书打下了坚实的基础。逐页研读本书的正文，大家就会清晰地体会到：大到章节段落，小到单词释义，甚至每天中的短小精悍的引子，无不在精准地传达着美式写作与北美文化的特质。
对这样一本致力结合中美文化的双语作品，每个读者都会获得属于自己的领悟。我本人特别推崇的是第8天中对美式议论文段落布局异常深入地剖析，涉及的领域十分庞杂却又每每能够和那些原汁原味的实例结合得天衣无缝，其中展现出的功力令我折服。而附录中所收入的66道难题原创高分段落，在Pat与他的朋友们一起进棚录音时几个“老美”朗读后都对文风给出了two thumbs up，让我们再次庆幸自己找到了一位真正值得信赖的合作伙伴。

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